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                                                                                          一次  

                                                                                          次在

                                                                              回忆回忆老地方的雨

                                                                   默默的我在等你雨淋湿了我的委屈

                                                           你悄悄的出现在我面前把我紧紧的拥在了怀里

                                                    一次次吹起竹笛你已沿着笛声远去静静的我在等你雨淋

                                                 湿了我的回忆你却不知道去了去了哪里把我的心也远远的带

                                            去我一个人在雨里有谁知道我在等你就这样的等下去等下去我一个

                                         人在雨里           有谁知道我在等你就这样的等下去等下          去老地方

                                       的雨                                  还在淅淅沥沥一次次                                 吹起

                                      竹                                                  笛的                                                  我

                                                                                            在你

                                                                                            雨淋

                                                                                            湿了

                                                                                            我的

                                                                                            回忆

                                                                                            你却

                                                                                            不知

                                                                                         去了

                                  去了哪里把我的                                                                                 
                       远远的带去我一个人在雨里有                       谁知                                                                        

                 道我在等你就这样的等下去等下去我                   一个                        

            人在           雨里有谁知道我在           等你                就这                      

          样                           的等下                       去               等下        

                                            去                                             老地  

                                            方                                             的雨      

                                            还                                             在淅

                                            淅                                             沥沥                

                                            我                                             一个                    

                                            人                                             在雨            

                                            里                                   有谁   知道                  

                                             我在                                    等你                          






这样的

等下去   等下去

我一个人

在雨里

有谁知道我在等你

就这样的

等下去  等下去

老地方的雨还在淅淅沥沥















最后编辑zxcx 最后编辑于 2016-08-04 09:44:40
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雨伞的排版很不错,就是分割线用的有点不搭,尽量别用截图的来做分割线

总体来说还是很棒的,继续加油,

花花飘上
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慢慢来 每天进步一点点
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